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Blue Jay Bloodloss thanked Anonymous' answer 6/3/2016

Would people laugh or be cruel if I had two dragons who were both male and were previous lovers in my story?

I would read it. I like dragon stories especially when they are the main characters.

Blue Jay Bloodloss thanked Rath Keale's answer 6/3/2016

Would people laugh or be cruel if I had two dragons who were both male and were previous lovers in my story?

My advice is to make them very good friends, snuggle together for warmth at night, and leave the rest to the reader's imagination. Show, don't tell everything

Blue Jay Bloodloss voted up Corey The Goofyhawk's answer 5/26/2016

How do I open a chapter about a character floating in the void? Chapter 10 of my friend’s book begins with a character named ‘Nightborn’ floating in an abyss-like place. Any ideas on how to open this chapter well?

Silence. Not even the slightest sliver of sound made it to Nightborn's ears as he floated in the void. The deafening silence brought a ringing to his ears. It was so painful that he lifted his hand and pressed against his forehead as if to shield himself from the pain. He opened his mouth to … Read more

Blue Jay Bloodloss thanked Didge Doo's answer 5/26/2016

How do I open a chapter about a character floating in the void? Chapter 10 of my friend’s book begins with a character named ‘Nightborn’ floating in an abyss-like place. Any ideas on how to open this chapter well?

I did something similar once in a (very) short story. It might help.

Karl Vonnasti stretched contentedly as he floated naked on a cushion of warm air about a metre above the floor and watched the multi-faceted monosphere pulsating with blue-green radiance as it hovered above his chest. He knew it would have signalled … Read more

Blue Jay Bloodloss thanked Corey The Goofyhawk's answer 5/26/2016

How do I open a chapter about a character floating in the void? Chapter 10 of my friend’s book begins with a character named ‘Nightborn’ floating in an abyss-like place. Any ideas on how to open this chapter well?

Silence. Not even the slightest sliver of sound made it to Nightborn's ears as he floated in the void. The deafening silence brought a ringing to his ears. It was so painful that he lifted his hand and pressed against his forehead as if to shield himself from the pain. He opened his mouth to … Read more