I know a little bit of Hawaiian, even though it is not my background, and I feel that each name is very honourable and sentimental.  Most are named after Volcano Gods and people of importance. I would chose a name that is so powerful it speaks for itself. How about; Abyss, (dark pit). I love … Read more

I suggest you use Word Office and right click an adjective and replace it with a synonym they give you. It's a great way to see how you can increase your vocabulary in a story.